Your first sentences are great at setting the scene.
Ahhh, thank you! I'm glad you think so <3
Honestly I could see a dialogue first sentence easily, because I love dialogue, I'm not sure why I don't do it more often? :D as long as it's a decent hook for the reader, it works imo! (I probably just. don't feel that confident in my dialogue usually 😂 I tend to like my dialogue where someone has a witty rejoinder best, but that's not a good start? Unless... I guess an interrogation scene dialogue might work well... or... hmmmm...)
...yeah I'm gonna end up starting a couple fics with dialogue now lmao
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on 2022-05-31 09:56 pm (UTC)Ahhh, thank you! I'm glad you think so <3
Honestly I could see a dialogue first sentence easily, because I love dialogue, I'm not sure why I don't do it more often? :D as long as it's a decent hook for the reader, it works imo! (I probably just. don't feel that confident in my dialogue usually 😂 I tend to like my dialogue where someone has a witty rejoinder best, but that's not a good start? Unless... I guess an interrogation scene dialogue might work well... or... hmmmm...)
...yeah I'm gonna end up starting a couple fics with dialogue now lmao